Thursday, 7 April 2011

Shailvi - The Persistent Go-getter

Shailvi is one diligent child who worked hard at improving her writing skills with each successive session. When she began, she wasn't quite sure where she belonged...


She worked through the exercises with a keenness to learn and grow...







The Work:



A TEMPTING JOURNEY
By Shailvi

Going to Vashi was such a dull trip. But you shall be expecting as I said. But when I reached it was a twisted place. That means an enlightened place with mixed-up people. A happy lady going with her fitting smooth outfit and of course soothing her.Though it was so cold but the lady with a free flowing dress was looking so tender for her. Next to the lady a beautiful small handed purse on a dirty little tired box. It was like a cold summer evening. The place was completely wet. The blooming tree was wet but pokey and were filled with thorns. The tree looked like a wet cactus fully with pokeness. Many butterflies were roaming out like nomads. It was time to go home. It was again as the dull travelling journey. I’m sure you are thinking what I am. It was a disgusting train and of course crowded. I reached in the morning only if I left in the night with the lighting stars and one moon but a cheesy one. I woke up in the morning but it was only an tempting journey in my dreams. It was again a good experience to Vashi.


The scenery – a hot and cold part of the story.
A girl with a flowering dress- enlightened and the butter flies of the story.
A train – About travelling in the story
A bag with a box – The wet, bag and box in the story


Her comments at the end of a couple sessions were as follows:





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