Shiv - The Unhurried Writer

As is apparent from his initial comments, Shiv somewhat struggled to stay focussed to the task of writing a given piece...

He slowly warmed up to the processes...

...and needed some amount of individual supervision....

The Work:

THE RESSLESS MACHINE IN THE FACTORY

By Shiv Udipi

One night I slept on the bed. In my dream I was in a factory, still, a silent machine. Then people came to use me but they used me in a very bad way. I was hurt, angry, ressles. I was the only electric machine in the factory, lonely. I felt like running out of the dream. Then I fell I had a backpain then the people came in a truck and took me back to the factory.I had a realization that I was useful. Wooh! At last my dream ended. The next day in school we lernt about a machine.The eighth chapter “The ressless machine in the factory.’ What a disaster.

The transition to the approach of writing seemed to have shifted....